Post by Renan on Oct 6, 2009 15:26:51 GMT -5
The Last Night Episode I
CHAPTER 1 Current Time: 7:30
I look outside my window and finally see my destination. I’ve been inside this car for about six hours. I shut off my handheld video game that I’ve been playing and put it into my pocket. I look over to see my younger sister unbuckling her seatbelt. My mother pulls up into the drive way while I notice my younger cousin Erick waving to me. I wave back at him since he’s easily one of my best friends. My mother finally parks the car and turns around tell me something. “Ren, Can you please go get the presents outside of the trunk?” I nod and get out of my seat. As I open the door my mother says “Renan, it’s been one year since your father died. I know it’s hard for you, but please behave.” “Yeah, I will, don’t worry mom.” I look over to see my sister wiping her eyes and then I close the door. I open the trunk and take out about seven Christmas presents. They’re quite heavy, but I manage. I walk over to Erick who offers to hold some presents. Being the type of person I am, I give him three presents and we move on inside.
Inside the house my sister, Cassia, quickly goes over to play with our younger cousin Melissa. Two young toddlers are running around on the floor playing with my Aunt Victoria’s dog. The children’s names are Jonathan and David. Her husband Uzias is with his three sons Philippe, the oldest, Fabio, the middle child, and Eduardo, the youngest watching soccer on TV. I look in a near by mirror and notice that I’m looking awfully handsome today. My dark brown hair is combed with a swoop in the front just like I like it and my blue church shirt looks awfully nice with my denim jeans and black dress shoes. My cousin Erick is wearing a winter jacket and jeans just like me, he has his messy black hair close to covering his eyes, but it curls up just enough so he can see. My younger sister, Cassia, is wearing a white dress and has her brown hair tied into a pony tail. My mother is much the same, but she is wearing a red dress. Jonathan and David are both wearing white church shirts and black pants and are walking around barefoot. Melissa is wearing a pink dress and has her long brown hair down. Philippe is wearing a black tux with his doctor’s coat over it, pretty much his way of showing that he’s a doctor now. Fabio is wearing a nice blue tux with nothing much to it. Eduardo and Uzias are wearing regular sweaters with jeans while my Aunt Victoria is wearing a black dress which only makes her look more obese than usual. Erick’s mom is wearing an orange dress with ribbons in random areas which adds flare to the dress. Helen and Ronald, the babies’ parents, are wearing matching clothes, as usual.
I look around; this just isn’t the same without my dad around. Last year he died in a tragic car crash. Ever since then life hasn’t been the same. I’ve been doing worse in school, I’ve been getting in more fights, and nothing really matters to me. I hate everything. I just wish everything would go away. Without my dad I have no one to look up to. I have no hero. God didn’t save my dad. I hate everything. I look up at the clock and the hour hand is about to strike eight. The party will start soon. Everyone will be having fun, laughing and talking. I hate parties. My mom walks over to and begins to talk to me. “Son, you don’t look like you’re having fun.” “Of course not, dad isn’t here.” “…Son, your dad…I’m sure he’d want you to have fun…” I look at her with a sad look in my eyes and turn around to look at the clock. The clock strikes eight. The power goes out and I hear a scream.
CHAPTER 2 Current Time: 8:00
The power comes back on and I turn around to see only Erick. “What the hell happened!?” I yell at Erick. “How the hell should I know!?” The two of us look at each other with scared and confused look sin our eyes. Suddenly, we hear a scream.
“It came from Eduardo’s room!” Erick shouts. We both run into Eduardo’s room and we see a horrifying sight. Eduardo is chained to his wall upside down with knifes swinging back and forth barely touching his forehead, wrists, and ankles. “G-guys! How did I get here!?” Eduardo screams as he cries. Erick and I look at the ground and we see a jig saw puzzle. Next to it a note is written completely in blood.
To whomever it may concern,
Young Eduardo is all chained up to the wall. Boo-hoo. If you wish to save the young man you have thirty seconds to finish this jigsaw puzzle. It is only a ten piece puzzle, but here is the catch. There are thirty pieces! Do you think you can do it? Well, let’s see you try!
Sincerely, The Supervisor.
“ERICK!” I shout “WE HAVE TO START THIS PUZZLE NOW!” The two of us begin to assemble the pieces of the puzzle together. Eduardo continues crying like a maniac as the knives slice into his skin. First his ankles are stabbed and the blood begins to flow like a fountain once the knives are removed. Then his wrists are stabbed. Blood continues to spill everywhere and Eduardo only cries more. Erick is holding what he believes to be the last piece of the puzzle, but as soon as he sets it down, it does not fit. We both look at our selves in shock as the final knife stabs into Eduardo’s forehead. Neither of us look behind us for the scream was too painful to listen to and witnessing a dead cousin would be too painful. We both walk out of the room and close the door. Erick looks at the ground and begins to throw up. As Erick is throwing up I notice that my foot is wet, I look down and see water flowing from the bathroom crack. I open the door and I let out a scream of terror.
There, lying in the water is my cousin David. He’s motionless. I quickly shut the door. “Re-Renan, what’s in there?” “N-nothing…just a spider…” Erick looks at me with a puzzled look, but we walk towards the main room. There we see Uzias fighting a huge spider. “Renan! Is this the spider you were telling me about!?” I look at Erick with wide eyes. Uzias slams his fist into the spider’s chest and he ducks from one of the spider’s claws. He tries to sweep the spider’s legs, but it fails. The spider turns around to reveal that the spider was actually Jonathan. His little body is barely sticking out with tears in his eyes. I quickly push Erick onto the ground and cover his eyes. Jonathan-Spider makes a stab at Uzias that pierces through his stomach, but Uzias was able to ram his fist into Jonathan-spider’s face, killing him instantly.
Uzias looked at me, and he began to speak. “Renan…are…my…sons…….safe…” Uzias then died on the spot. I look down at him and then I looked back at Erick who was getting up. I quickly grabbed Erick’s arm and brought him downstairs. There was nothing left for us here.
CHAPTER 3 Current Time: 8:30
I bring Erick downstairs where we meet our next problem. My mother and sister are there being pursued by Fabio who is holding a knife. “RENAN!” my mother screams! By instinct I know what to do. I look over and find the nearest weapon. I pick up a metallic baseball bat and scream “FABIO! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS!?” Fabio stops and looks over at me. His eyes are blood red. He isn’t human anymore. My mother is holding my sister so she doesn’t see what would happen next. Fabio charges at me, but I dodge. I swing my bat at him and it rams him in the chest. Fabio makes a quick recovery and swings at me, but Erick who grabbed a pipe while I wasn’t looking blocked the knife. I side stepped and rammed my bat into Fabio’s head. Blood was gushing out of his skull. He made one last attack, but missed and fell to the ground. Fabio’s skull began to bleed even more…
“Mom! Cassia! Are you alright?” I shout at them. “Yes sweetheart. Thank you very much.” “Yeah! Thanks bro!” I looked at them and smiled, but then something happened. The lights went out and they were gone. Before I could react I noticed a note on the ground written with blue ink.
To whomever it may concern,
Congratulations! You’ve rescued your first two victims! They’re safe so don’t worry! Now continue saving the people because once the clock hits twelve, the game is over!
Sincerely, The Supervisor
“Am-Am I supposed to believe this?” “We really have no choice.” Said Erick. He was right. I had to believe in this since it was my only comfort. Erick and I decided to walk into the next room. There we saw something that would scar Erick for the rest of his life. His mother was chained to a bed while a pendulum was swinging back and forth. If we didn’t do anything. His mother would die. Erick screamed in fear and anger. He ran over to the lever area and pulled the first lever he saw. “ERICK NO!” I screamed, trying to stop him. But it was too late.
CHAPTER 4 Current Time: 9:00
The pendulum struck down on Erick’s mother and cut her in half. Erick was in total disbelief. Blood flowed from the bed onto the floor. Tears began to flow down Erick’s face. I wish I could have said something to comfort him, but that seemed like an impossible task right now. Erick knelt down on all fours and began to let it all out. He shouted and cried like a baby. I just looked at him and felt terrible for his loss. His mother died right before his very eyes. I decided that it would be best if I continued alone, Erick had a weapon on him and he needs to be alone right now. I walked back to the room where my mother and sister were “saved” and then entered the room on the other side of this room. I looked around, but saw nothing of interest. As I leave the room a hand grabs my shoulder. My heart races as I quickly turn around and swing my bat. The shadowy figure grabs my bat and says “Renan, it’s me, Philippe. Relax buddy.” I let out a sigh. “It’s good to see you’re still alive, Phil.” “The feelings mutual. Believe it or not, but both Melissa and my mother are dead. I was not able to save them…” My chest got hard. Melissa, a young child had died. I was in shock. I honestly didn’t know what to say, so I just stayed quite. “…Anyways, Renan, we have to get out of here. I got a note saying that if we can make it to the hill near my house the murders will end, but I lost the note.” I stared at him for a second with disbelief in my eyes. “You trust me right?” …I had no choice. I had to trust him.
Phil and I went and got Erick who was still crying and we went to the courtyard which was the only way to get to the hill. To be honest, I was surprised that the door was able to open. I just assumed that every door would be locked. We continue outside where we saw both Melissa AND Victoria. I turned around and looked at Phil. Phil glared down at me as Erick kept shouting the fact that Melissa and Victoria were there and alive. I ready my bat and Phil gives off an evil smile. He begins to laugh maniacally and his arms turn into blades. “That’s not Phil!” Erick screamed. “I kind of noticed!” I shouted as I dodged one of his swings. “Hurry and get them out of here Erick!” Erick nodded and ran over to them. I didn’t know it, but something really bad was about to happen.
As Erick ran over to Melissa and Victoria, Phil swung his blade arms at me and I blocked with my bat. I started swinging and jumping and ducking as he tried to slice me. I swung with all my might and was able to hit him, but it his blade arm and he seemed to not even be hurt by it at all. He sliced down at me and sliced my cheek. Blood began to pour down and the pain of the slash was heavy. I turned my bat upside down and began to hit it with it. Erick noticing I was having trouble told Melissa and Victoria to stay where they were and ran over holding his knife and slashed at Phil while he was focusing on me. The two of us began to attack him. I turned my bat upside down again and began to beat him with it as Erick slashed. Eventually Phil became overpowered and silently went down.
To the two boys who are doing much too well,
Congrats, you just killed Phil. That’s right; it wasn’t a trick or anything. You actually killed Philippe! The blades were all an illusion done by me! A magic trick as you would say. Now check the mess you’ve made.
Erick and I look at each other and look back. Victoria and Melissa are terrified by our actions. I check my cheek and notice that I was not bleeding at all and a bee just happened to sting me. Victoria and Melissa ran away and I looked down and saw that Phil had no blades on his arms at all. “Oh my God…” Erick was speechless. “Erick…we just killed our cousin…” Erick began to cry and ran into the house. I decided it would be best to leave him behind. “I can’t let Melissa and Victoria get too far.” I said to myself. I began to run after them, praying I wasn’t too late and that they didn’t get too far.
CHAPTER 5 Current Time: 9:30
As of right now, to my knowledge, only Erick, Victoria, Melissa, Ronald, Helen, and I are left. These murders are carefully crafted so that leaves me to believe that the murderer is either Ronald or Helen, but why exactly would they kill their own children, which puts me in some disbelief. It could also be Melissa who is a well known striver for attention, but then again she isn’t very bright. It can’t be Victoria since she’s quite the idiot and it can’t be Erick either since I doubt his acting skills are this good. I’m at a total loss right now.
I began to walk around the courtyard searching for Melissa and Victoria when I hear a gunshot. It’s near by I think to myself. I begin to take caution while walking when I hear another shot; I look behind me and notice that the bullet was aiming at me. I make this assumption by noticing a fresh bullet hole in my sleeve. I look up and notice Victoria. “YOU KILLED PHILLIP YOU MONSTER!!!” She begins to fire like crazy. I run as fast as I can while dodging the bullets. A bullet pierces into my arm, but I have to ignore it for now or else I’ll die. I decide to run into the huge maze that Victoria and Uzias put in for Eduardo last year. Maybe here I’ll be safe.
I can hear Victoria’s footsteps as I silently go through the maze as blood flows down my arm. “I know you’re here Renan.” She says in a loud and devilish voice. I get scared and begin to pick up my pace. I accidentally step on a branch and she shouts out to Melissa to get near her quick or I’ll kill her. Melissa begins to cry, but I start running as fast as I can while hearing the gunshots that are meant for me. I find the exit of the maze, but if I leave she’ll follow me due to the mud that is outside the exit. My footprints would be engraved and she’d follow them. Instead I climb the concrete wall of the maze and I have full view of the maze. Victoria notices me and readies her gun.
She fires at me while yelling “Die you bastard!” I jump down to the other side of the wall, but the bullet hits my already bleeding arm and I fall down on my injured arm adding even more pain. I cry out in pain and try to crawl to an area where I can regain balance. Victoria shouts out that she’ll get me by climbing the walls, but I know she can’t with her current obesity so she’ll most likely walk through the entire maze until she finds and kills me. I find a tree and use it to regain my balance. I begin to run and switch my bat to my left hand since my right arm is hurting on an unholy level. Lucky for me I’m ambidextrous.
CHAPTER 6 Current Time: 10:00
I run into the house where I see Erick sitting on a chair. He looks up and sees my bloody arm. “Renan…what happened?” “Victoria is after us. She shot me twice and she’ll kill you the moment she sees you. We have to leave” “But what about Helen and Ronald!?” “What about them!? We have to leave! And more importantly one of them is the killer!” Erick finally understood. We had no allies at all and we had to leave. “…Alright, how do we leave?” I look at him and sit down. “We kill Victoria and take Melissa to the hill. We can reach the hill by going through the maze, but the problem is that Victoria is there right now with a gun and I have a feeling she knows we’ll try and escape to there.” Erick swallowed everything I told him and agreed to go along with it. We were about to walk outside when Erick said “Let’s patch your arm up first.”
Erick and I try to open the door to the upstairs, but it seems to be locked. Erick looks over and says “Well, looks like you’ll have to deal with that arm for now.” “Whatever, as long as I don’t die I’m fine.” We begin to walk back outside when we’re stopped by two shadowy figures. It was Helen and Ronald. They were holding David who had drowned in the tub. Their cold eyes stared deep into our souls. Erick looked at David and tears began to flow like crazy. “Why didn’t you save him?” Helen asked me in a low toned voice. My heart began to race and my eyes opened up in shock. I began to cry and I fell to the floor. I couldn’t talk at all. “Renan, we saw you enter the bathroom.” Ronald says as he takes out a handgun and points it at my head. “Wh-Why do you have that?” Ronald looks down at me. “Because, you two are the killers.” I look over to Erick and I notice that Helen has a knife over Erick’s neck.
The tension is rising ten fold. Ronald puts his son into his baby basket and puts a blanket over his head all while keeping the gun on my head. I see that Erick is crying and I notice that I am too. Helen yells at us to shut up and then I scream out “What makes you think we’re the killers!?” Ronald looks at me. “Every death so far ahs been because of you. You may have not been the one who put us in this situation, but everyone who’s died has been because of you!” I got furious. “IF YOU SAW ALL THAT THEN YOU SHOUL DHAVE HELPED US SAVE EVERYONE!” “Shut up! We’re the ones talking here!” Screamed Ronald as he smashed his fist into my forehead. Then I thought of something. “Erick and I didn’t cause every death! Uzias and Jonathan killed each other!” Helen’s eyes opened wide and let go of Erick. “J-Jonathan died!?” Ronald was just as shocked. He pulled his gun pack and fell to the ground in tears. This may have not been the best thing to do, but I seized my best and bashed it into Ronald’s head, grabbed Erick and ran away as fast as possible.
Erick and I continued to run as fast as we could into the maze. We both heard gunshots from two sides. Victoria probably saw us and Ronald clearly wants us dead, especially due to my poor choice of words. The two of us accidentally got to a dead end and guess who was there waiting for us. “V-Victoria!?” Erick shouted as she readied her gun. “Listen shits, everyone here has died because of you! I know that!” “Oh ? And where’s your proof you obese bitch!?” I shouted while readying my bat with my left hat. Erick was unarmed due to Helen stealing his knife. “Do you want to know how I know? Because of this!” Victoria pointed to Melissa who stepped to the right revealing a message on the wall.
Dearest Victoria,
As you may already know both Renan and Erick are the killers. Kill them and I’ll grant you the wish of reviving those you love.
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CHAPTER 1 Current Time: 7:30
I look outside my window and finally see my destination. I’ve been inside this car for about six hours. I shut off my handheld video game that I’ve been playing and put it into my pocket. I look over to see my younger sister unbuckling her seatbelt. My mother pulls up into the drive way while I notice my younger cousin Erick waving to me. I wave back at him since he’s easily one of my best friends. My mother finally parks the car and turns around tell me something. “Ren, Can you please go get the presents outside of the trunk?” I nod and get out of my seat. As I open the door my mother says “Renan, it’s been one year since your father died. I know it’s hard for you, but please behave.” “Yeah, I will, don’t worry mom.” I look over to see my sister wiping her eyes and then I close the door. I open the trunk and take out about seven Christmas presents. They’re quite heavy, but I manage. I walk over to Erick who offers to hold some presents. Being the type of person I am, I give him three presents and we move on inside.
Inside the house my sister, Cassia, quickly goes over to play with our younger cousin Melissa. Two young toddlers are running around on the floor playing with my Aunt Victoria’s dog. The children’s names are Jonathan and David. Her husband Uzias is with his three sons Philippe, the oldest, Fabio, the middle child, and Eduardo, the youngest watching soccer on TV. I look in a near by mirror and notice that I’m looking awfully handsome today. My dark brown hair is combed with a swoop in the front just like I like it and my blue church shirt looks awfully nice with my denim jeans and black dress shoes. My cousin Erick is wearing a winter jacket and jeans just like me, he has his messy black hair close to covering his eyes, but it curls up just enough so he can see. My younger sister, Cassia, is wearing a white dress and has her brown hair tied into a pony tail. My mother is much the same, but she is wearing a red dress. Jonathan and David are both wearing white church shirts and black pants and are walking around barefoot. Melissa is wearing a pink dress and has her long brown hair down. Philippe is wearing a black tux with his doctor’s coat over it, pretty much his way of showing that he’s a doctor now. Fabio is wearing a nice blue tux with nothing much to it. Eduardo and Uzias are wearing regular sweaters with jeans while my Aunt Victoria is wearing a black dress which only makes her look more obese than usual. Erick’s mom is wearing an orange dress with ribbons in random areas which adds flare to the dress. Helen and Ronald, the babies’ parents, are wearing matching clothes, as usual.
I look around; this just isn’t the same without my dad around. Last year he died in a tragic car crash. Ever since then life hasn’t been the same. I’ve been doing worse in school, I’ve been getting in more fights, and nothing really matters to me. I hate everything. I just wish everything would go away. Without my dad I have no one to look up to. I have no hero. God didn’t save my dad. I hate everything. I look up at the clock and the hour hand is about to strike eight. The party will start soon. Everyone will be having fun, laughing and talking. I hate parties. My mom walks over to and begins to talk to me. “Son, you don’t look like you’re having fun.” “Of course not, dad isn’t here.” “…Son, your dad…I’m sure he’d want you to have fun…” I look at her with a sad look in my eyes and turn around to look at the clock. The clock strikes eight. The power goes out and I hear a scream.
CHAPTER 2 Current Time: 8:00
The power comes back on and I turn around to see only Erick. “What the hell happened!?” I yell at Erick. “How the hell should I know!?” The two of us look at each other with scared and confused look sin our eyes. Suddenly, we hear a scream.
“It came from Eduardo’s room!” Erick shouts. We both run into Eduardo’s room and we see a horrifying sight. Eduardo is chained to his wall upside down with knifes swinging back and forth barely touching his forehead, wrists, and ankles. “G-guys! How did I get here!?” Eduardo screams as he cries. Erick and I look at the ground and we see a jig saw puzzle. Next to it a note is written completely in blood.
To whomever it may concern,
Young Eduardo is all chained up to the wall. Boo-hoo. If you wish to save the young man you have thirty seconds to finish this jigsaw puzzle. It is only a ten piece puzzle, but here is the catch. There are thirty pieces! Do you think you can do it? Well, let’s see you try!
Sincerely, The Supervisor.
“ERICK!” I shout “WE HAVE TO START THIS PUZZLE NOW!” The two of us begin to assemble the pieces of the puzzle together. Eduardo continues crying like a maniac as the knives slice into his skin. First his ankles are stabbed and the blood begins to flow like a fountain once the knives are removed. Then his wrists are stabbed. Blood continues to spill everywhere and Eduardo only cries more. Erick is holding what he believes to be the last piece of the puzzle, but as soon as he sets it down, it does not fit. We both look at our selves in shock as the final knife stabs into Eduardo’s forehead. Neither of us look behind us for the scream was too painful to listen to and witnessing a dead cousin would be too painful. We both walk out of the room and close the door. Erick looks at the ground and begins to throw up. As Erick is throwing up I notice that my foot is wet, I look down and see water flowing from the bathroom crack. I open the door and I let out a scream of terror.
There, lying in the water is my cousin David. He’s motionless. I quickly shut the door. “Re-Renan, what’s in there?” “N-nothing…just a spider…” Erick looks at me with a puzzled look, but we walk towards the main room. There we see Uzias fighting a huge spider. “Renan! Is this the spider you were telling me about!?” I look at Erick with wide eyes. Uzias slams his fist into the spider’s chest and he ducks from one of the spider’s claws. He tries to sweep the spider’s legs, but it fails. The spider turns around to reveal that the spider was actually Jonathan. His little body is barely sticking out with tears in his eyes. I quickly push Erick onto the ground and cover his eyes. Jonathan-Spider makes a stab at Uzias that pierces through his stomach, but Uzias was able to ram his fist into Jonathan-spider’s face, killing him instantly.
Uzias looked at me, and he began to speak. “Renan…are…my…sons…….safe…” Uzias then died on the spot. I look down at him and then I looked back at Erick who was getting up. I quickly grabbed Erick’s arm and brought him downstairs. There was nothing left for us here.
CHAPTER 3 Current Time: 8:30
I bring Erick downstairs where we meet our next problem. My mother and sister are there being pursued by Fabio who is holding a knife. “RENAN!” my mother screams! By instinct I know what to do. I look over and find the nearest weapon. I pick up a metallic baseball bat and scream “FABIO! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS!?” Fabio stops and looks over at me. His eyes are blood red. He isn’t human anymore. My mother is holding my sister so she doesn’t see what would happen next. Fabio charges at me, but I dodge. I swing my bat at him and it rams him in the chest. Fabio makes a quick recovery and swings at me, but Erick who grabbed a pipe while I wasn’t looking blocked the knife. I side stepped and rammed my bat into Fabio’s head. Blood was gushing out of his skull. He made one last attack, but missed and fell to the ground. Fabio’s skull began to bleed even more…
“Mom! Cassia! Are you alright?” I shout at them. “Yes sweetheart. Thank you very much.” “Yeah! Thanks bro!” I looked at them and smiled, but then something happened. The lights went out and they were gone. Before I could react I noticed a note on the ground written with blue ink.
To whomever it may concern,
Congratulations! You’ve rescued your first two victims! They’re safe so don’t worry! Now continue saving the people because once the clock hits twelve, the game is over!
Sincerely, The Supervisor
“Am-Am I supposed to believe this?” “We really have no choice.” Said Erick. He was right. I had to believe in this since it was my only comfort. Erick and I decided to walk into the next room. There we saw something that would scar Erick for the rest of his life. His mother was chained to a bed while a pendulum was swinging back and forth. If we didn’t do anything. His mother would die. Erick screamed in fear and anger. He ran over to the lever area and pulled the first lever he saw. “ERICK NO!” I screamed, trying to stop him. But it was too late.
CHAPTER 4 Current Time: 9:00
The pendulum struck down on Erick’s mother and cut her in half. Erick was in total disbelief. Blood flowed from the bed onto the floor. Tears began to flow down Erick’s face. I wish I could have said something to comfort him, but that seemed like an impossible task right now. Erick knelt down on all fours and began to let it all out. He shouted and cried like a baby. I just looked at him and felt terrible for his loss. His mother died right before his very eyes. I decided that it would be best if I continued alone, Erick had a weapon on him and he needs to be alone right now. I walked back to the room where my mother and sister were “saved” and then entered the room on the other side of this room. I looked around, but saw nothing of interest. As I leave the room a hand grabs my shoulder. My heart races as I quickly turn around and swing my bat. The shadowy figure grabs my bat and says “Renan, it’s me, Philippe. Relax buddy.” I let out a sigh. “It’s good to see you’re still alive, Phil.” “The feelings mutual. Believe it or not, but both Melissa and my mother are dead. I was not able to save them…” My chest got hard. Melissa, a young child had died. I was in shock. I honestly didn’t know what to say, so I just stayed quite. “…Anyways, Renan, we have to get out of here. I got a note saying that if we can make it to the hill near my house the murders will end, but I lost the note.” I stared at him for a second with disbelief in my eyes. “You trust me right?” …I had no choice. I had to trust him.
Phil and I went and got Erick who was still crying and we went to the courtyard which was the only way to get to the hill. To be honest, I was surprised that the door was able to open. I just assumed that every door would be locked. We continue outside where we saw both Melissa AND Victoria. I turned around and looked at Phil. Phil glared down at me as Erick kept shouting the fact that Melissa and Victoria were there and alive. I ready my bat and Phil gives off an evil smile. He begins to laugh maniacally and his arms turn into blades. “That’s not Phil!” Erick screamed. “I kind of noticed!” I shouted as I dodged one of his swings. “Hurry and get them out of here Erick!” Erick nodded and ran over to them. I didn’t know it, but something really bad was about to happen.
As Erick ran over to Melissa and Victoria, Phil swung his blade arms at me and I blocked with my bat. I started swinging and jumping and ducking as he tried to slice me. I swung with all my might and was able to hit him, but it his blade arm and he seemed to not even be hurt by it at all. He sliced down at me and sliced my cheek. Blood began to pour down and the pain of the slash was heavy. I turned my bat upside down and began to hit it with it. Erick noticing I was having trouble told Melissa and Victoria to stay where they were and ran over holding his knife and slashed at Phil while he was focusing on me. The two of us began to attack him. I turned my bat upside down again and began to beat him with it as Erick slashed. Eventually Phil became overpowered and silently went down.
To the two boys who are doing much too well,
Congrats, you just killed Phil. That’s right; it wasn’t a trick or anything. You actually killed Philippe! The blades were all an illusion done by me! A magic trick as you would say. Now check the mess you’ve made.
Erick and I look at each other and look back. Victoria and Melissa are terrified by our actions. I check my cheek and notice that I was not bleeding at all and a bee just happened to sting me. Victoria and Melissa ran away and I looked down and saw that Phil had no blades on his arms at all. “Oh my God…” Erick was speechless. “Erick…we just killed our cousin…” Erick began to cry and ran into the house. I decided it would be best to leave him behind. “I can’t let Melissa and Victoria get too far.” I said to myself. I began to run after them, praying I wasn’t too late and that they didn’t get too far.
CHAPTER 5 Current Time: 9:30
As of right now, to my knowledge, only Erick, Victoria, Melissa, Ronald, Helen, and I are left. These murders are carefully crafted so that leaves me to believe that the murderer is either Ronald or Helen, but why exactly would they kill their own children, which puts me in some disbelief. It could also be Melissa who is a well known striver for attention, but then again she isn’t very bright. It can’t be Victoria since she’s quite the idiot and it can’t be Erick either since I doubt his acting skills are this good. I’m at a total loss right now.
I began to walk around the courtyard searching for Melissa and Victoria when I hear a gunshot. It’s near by I think to myself. I begin to take caution while walking when I hear another shot; I look behind me and notice that the bullet was aiming at me. I make this assumption by noticing a fresh bullet hole in my sleeve. I look up and notice Victoria. “YOU KILLED PHILLIP YOU MONSTER!!!” She begins to fire like crazy. I run as fast as I can while dodging the bullets. A bullet pierces into my arm, but I have to ignore it for now or else I’ll die. I decide to run into the huge maze that Victoria and Uzias put in for Eduardo last year. Maybe here I’ll be safe.
I can hear Victoria’s footsteps as I silently go through the maze as blood flows down my arm. “I know you’re here Renan.” She says in a loud and devilish voice. I get scared and begin to pick up my pace. I accidentally step on a branch and she shouts out to Melissa to get near her quick or I’ll kill her. Melissa begins to cry, but I start running as fast as I can while hearing the gunshots that are meant for me. I find the exit of the maze, but if I leave she’ll follow me due to the mud that is outside the exit. My footprints would be engraved and she’d follow them. Instead I climb the concrete wall of the maze and I have full view of the maze. Victoria notices me and readies her gun.
She fires at me while yelling “Die you bastard!” I jump down to the other side of the wall, but the bullet hits my already bleeding arm and I fall down on my injured arm adding even more pain. I cry out in pain and try to crawl to an area where I can regain balance. Victoria shouts out that she’ll get me by climbing the walls, but I know she can’t with her current obesity so she’ll most likely walk through the entire maze until she finds and kills me. I find a tree and use it to regain my balance. I begin to run and switch my bat to my left hand since my right arm is hurting on an unholy level. Lucky for me I’m ambidextrous.
CHAPTER 6 Current Time: 10:00
I run into the house where I see Erick sitting on a chair. He looks up and sees my bloody arm. “Renan…what happened?” “Victoria is after us. She shot me twice and she’ll kill you the moment she sees you. We have to leave” “But what about Helen and Ronald!?” “What about them!? We have to leave! And more importantly one of them is the killer!” Erick finally understood. We had no allies at all and we had to leave. “…Alright, how do we leave?” I look at him and sit down. “We kill Victoria and take Melissa to the hill. We can reach the hill by going through the maze, but the problem is that Victoria is there right now with a gun and I have a feeling she knows we’ll try and escape to there.” Erick swallowed everything I told him and agreed to go along with it. We were about to walk outside when Erick said “Let’s patch your arm up first.”
Erick and I try to open the door to the upstairs, but it seems to be locked. Erick looks over and says “Well, looks like you’ll have to deal with that arm for now.” “Whatever, as long as I don’t die I’m fine.” We begin to walk back outside when we’re stopped by two shadowy figures. It was Helen and Ronald. They were holding David who had drowned in the tub. Their cold eyes stared deep into our souls. Erick looked at David and tears began to flow like crazy. “Why didn’t you save him?” Helen asked me in a low toned voice. My heart began to race and my eyes opened up in shock. I began to cry and I fell to the floor. I couldn’t talk at all. “Renan, we saw you enter the bathroom.” Ronald says as he takes out a handgun and points it at my head. “Wh-Why do you have that?” Ronald looks down at me. “Because, you two are the killers.” I look over to Erick and I notice that Helen has a knife over Erick’s neck.
The tension is rising ten fold. Ronald puts his son into his baby basket and puts a blanket over his head all while keeping the gun on my head. I see that Erick is crying and I notice that I am too. Helen yells at us to shut up and then I scream out “What makes you think we’re the killers!?” Ronald looks at me. “Every death so far ahs been because of you. You may have not been the one who put us in this situation, but everyone who’s died has been because of you!” I got furious. “IF YOU SAW ALL THAT THEN YOU SHOUL DHAVE HELPED US SAVE EVERYONE!” “Shut up! We’re the ones talking here!” Screamed Ronald as he smashed his fist into my forehead. Then I thought of something. “Erick and I didn’t cause every death! Uzias and Jonathan killed each other!” Helen’s eyes opened wide and let go of Erick. “J-Jonathan died!?” Ronald was just as shocked. He pulled his gun pack and fell to the ground in tears. This may have not been the best thing to do, but I seized my best and bashed it into Ronald’s head, grabbed Erick and ran away as fast as possible.
Erick and I continued to run as fast as we could into the maze. We both heard gunshots from two sides. Victoria probably saw us and Ronald clearly wants us dead, especially due to my poor choice of words. The two of us accidentally got to a dead end and guess who was there waiting for us. “V-Victoria!?” Erick shouted as she readied her gun. “Listen shits, everyone here has died because of you! I know that!” “Oh ? And where’s your proof you obese bitch!?” I shouted while readying my bat with my left hat. Erick was unarmed due to Helen stealing his knife. “Do you want to know how I know? Because of this!” Victoria pointed to Melissa who stepped to the right revealing a message on the wall.
Dearest Victoria,
As you may already know both Renan and Erick are the killers. Kill them and I’ll grant you the wish of reviving those you love.
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